I guess the technical term is unreliable narrator. I am thinking of doin another short from the perspective of the other Philip K. Dick, which will also be flawed as he is some kind of genius mad scientist from an old Outter Limits episode trying to make it on low wages in Kansas.
The narrator is supposed to be a kind of turn off, the whole gag is he doesn't get what he is seeing until the very end because of his prejudice against rural people.
Would people be more interested in subscribing if I did paywalled video readings of more poetic things I put up as a perc for becoming a subscriber?
You've certainly piqued my interest in your writing. Many thanks 🙏
I really enjoyed it!
Cool, thanks.
Hmm, intriguing and i would like to hear more. The narrative voice was irritating, the dialogue wooden but the story wound me right in!
Kind of like the original Philip K. Dick? Lol.
I guess the technical term is unreliable narrator. I am thinking of doin another short from the perspective of the other Philip K. Dick, which will also be flawed as he is some kind of genius mad scientist from an old Outter Limits episode trying to make it on low wages in Kansas.
The narrator is supposed to be a kind of turn off, the whole gag is he doesn't get what he is seeing until the very end because of his prejudice against rural people.
My kind of story 🙏🙏🙏
Thanks.
To be honest, Mr Raven, i am unlikely to subscribe with money as i am on a limited income and have picked out a very few favourites to support.
Cool, thanks.